I've had a few ideas but none of them seem to be achievable, i think this idea could be. Can you please tell me if you think its shit or not and if i'm ripping anyone off, all comments are welcome. ta la's.
I wanted to film it all at night and i'm trying not to use animation because of the required time length. I'll tell the story as you would see it once it has been edited.
It starts with a group of lads running away down the street, the next shot will be a man lying in the street knocked out with the lads running away in the background. The story will then go back to the start and will follow the man on his journey home. on his travels a group of lads are walking behind him and he starts gets paranoid, he begins to psyche himself up as they get closer. He waits for his moment and turns to confront them with a war-cry and a scowl! They are terrified and run away. The man stands there proudly smiling as he watches them run away , he's got a spring in his step and begins to walk away backwards. as he turns to carry on his journey he walks face first into a lamp-post and knocks himself clean out. The End.
I'v been thinking about a different version with the same beginning but the bloke's been ran over or something and the lads are going over to help.
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It's a good concept - I can visualise the ending. Just when people are wondering how he ended up on the floor he trips on a banana skin or a burger wrapper or something.
Depends how you want to present this, it could be quite humorous, which is how I visualise it, or have a serious message. The darkness might help if you decide to go with the latter of these.
Is this the music brief? Even if it isn't it might be good to get a musical piece that reflects the mood you want to create so that would be something to consider.
Don't think you're ripping anyone off but there's a few adverts that work on this principle. The good news is that none spring to mind immediately so you're probably safe there.
Hey I like this idea a lot I visualised it when i read it. I imagine it to be humorous as Dan said. You could start it off quite serious with the reactions of the boys when the man is on the floor, make it seem to the viewer they are responsible but in the end your getting the message across that things aren't always as they seem. I like it.
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